writing



in term one and two we did a wrinting sesoion on a andy griffets story that was fun and we had to do arouned 50 wrords

plan

we had to paln this andy griffets story and we had a pla man that help you do the story i think inproved in doing the plan

editing

when we finshed the storey we had to edit it after we edit it we had to puplish it in word and we hav to under line the words if we think is spelt wrong and we hav done that we get a dictionary

editing cards

miss s hav some cards that help you edit your story they help a lot they are reley good and they give you good ideas to make your plan i better plan they give advis for your plan

we are workig on a extreme story it is a lot of fun and mine was about going to jum of the sydeny brige and the rope snapd